For some odd reason, I'm just imagining the characters' musical tastes: Lucas as a jazz/funk trombonist, Leigh as a punk-rock guitarist, and Oscar as a (hyper)pop tenor.
I will be sincere... this is one of the most beautiful and well arranged visual novel I have the pleasure to play!!! I like the introspective point of view of the main character and... god Oscar will be the death of me... he is... is... just too much! I love him so much ahahah. Keep going! I can't wait to read the next part!
I'm really glad you enjoyed Wallace's perspective. I really wanted to make his internal monologue and personality shine through as this is just as much his story as the rest of the boys. I hope we've able to keep you satisfied throughout this VN's journey.
okay i wont lie as someone who has wrote book and or novels myself, this visual novel is one of the best i have had the pleasure of reading and i'm sure everyone else who has also read it would think so to. Lucas is by far my favourite he is so cute! and is really complex and just an all round amazing character! keep up the great work!
I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far! Your kind words are very much appreciated and I'm really glad you like Lucas so much! We've all been working really hard to make this project work, so I hope we can meet your expectations going forward.
So far, I've discovered two things: Theres an "R" after "conforting".
And "Yeah, I'm Okay. It was just a silly nightmare. I don't know why freaked lut so much." Is written twice. Unless It's done in purpose, but I don't think so.Sorry If this is being too rude :3
Hello! I read the current demo and it's very good. What I like the most is that it has a backbone --the main plot of murder-mystery-- that supports the VN than mainly focusing on the romance of the characters' slice of life and than being a typical college story. It gives something to continue to read and root for the MC. I look forward in the next update.
Gallery hasn't been added yet! I'm not quite sure how to program it right, so I'll putting it on hold until I either get a programmer or can figure out how to do it myself.
I really like the game, I'm still semi new to the world of visual novels but this is very different from the other ones I have played, then such a heavy cliff hanger im interested in the next update 👍
so whoever made that art of the oscar has all of my love cause holy- his energy is so bright... and damn that sudden change when lucas was embarrassed caught me off guard the cliffhanger pains me so much
I wanna add to the Comments. I think this is the best game start I've seen in a long time. This set the bar so high and i hope it stays up there, i really have high hopes for this one. Literally great writing, amazing character choice. Great CGs (people who played this through know why). This could be the best VN out there if it continues like this. I can't think of anything to add but keep up the work.
I loved the first build of the novel, though I think it's a little bit obvious who the favourite character out of the three are x) Played through all routes and I like the major differences between the characters. I personally like Lucas more than Oscar and Leigh, but all three characters have their own charms, let alone Wallace being adorable in their own right! :)
The only "issue" I guess I have is the pacing seemed to just go out of wack and suddenly in a, I'm guessing, dream state/ dream scene? Like, when you choose to sit down next to someone, then you get up after a text and suddenly need to save someone from being hung? Just seems sudden and a weird change of pace for me. I'm not a writer personally, so maybe my advice isn't the best, but I feel like it'd be better on the reader if it were worded differently, or if it were presented differently. Otherwise, I do like the direction that this novel is going, and it will be one that I keep up to date with! I love romance / horror series like Echo and TSR and I think this has the capability to reach such stardom! <3 I'd love to be apart of the discord and the process of this VN being built upon, giving feedback where needed :)
Personally, I love the 3 of them each one are absolutely charming in his own way (Oscar: sexy and love teasing/ Leight: mysterious, class, calm and really kind/ Lucas: sharp-tongue but really shy with knowledge of his own defaults, with a sweet heart inside) ^^
this is awesome hope to see more I just finished Oscar route but I will do the Possum route Leigh if I remember and I will do Lucas route soon but I will tomorrow I can't wait for other stuff that would be awesome.
Violet Memoir? More like GOLDEN MEMOIR HOLY COW. Seriously have never played a visual novel build for the first time and have been as excited for the next update, ever. I mean, an enticing story revolving around a serial killer and trying to dissect how she lost her marbles, well-written characters that aren't just one dimensional for love interests, a JAW-DROPPING nightmare sequence coupled with a skin-crawling score for maximum tension and dread? I mean geez the only thing that could have been the proverbial cherry on top for that part is if there was a CG of the boy of interest you chose just to help showcase the disfiguration Wallace described. I've already played all 3 routes twice because it's just that good. (Ashleigh is my favorite for his mother hen personality but Oscar is a loveable flirty goof and Lucas is the spicy fox that's never afraid to tell it like it is. Even having a favorite though I would be happy ending up with any of them <3)
If you can stomach the horror I would definitely recommend trying this to anyone. I AM HOOKED.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that you're excited for the next build! We'll hopefully be pumping these out each month. Leigh is definitely a great choice for a favorite, so I'm ecstatic you love him so much.
I love hearing about the parts you enjoyed, I really hope you'll enjoy how the story unfolds especially learning more about these characters I love.
Hello VioletMemoir ! I'm just finish to play your VN: and it's was really really good^^ ! good job, please continue !
But I have one question: the background song named "peaceful" in the audio files, what is his real name and who is the artist who make it because it's really a beautiful song and I want to know who made this...
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Peaceful was a royalty free song made by Luca Fraula. All the songs in the files are in the about section in the title screen.
It's currently undecided. I'll be talking to my patrons after a couple of builds asking for their thoughts on if it should stay sfw or not. If it comes to it, I could just do versions with both.
Absolutely been loving the story so far. My only gripes are that the music abruptly stops sometimes instead of being gradually slowed down (ok for certain parts though) and the loops of it isn't as smooth as I'd like to be. By no means am I an expert on the topic but I just figured I'd give my opinion on that.
All 3 of the guys are endearing in their own way and I always have to really think about what my main route would be. Oscar best boi don't @ me but Lucas is just so adorable. Not as interested in Leigh but I'm sure that if I bothered to get to know him more I'd love him as much as the other two.
If the quality of this keeps up then it'd sure get people talking like some of the other VNs around.
Edit: Forgot to mention that I love that we're playing as Wallace and not as ourselves. We don't need to literally be in the story to be invested. Honestly not throwing shade on other stories that let us do it however
Thanks for the kind words! I'll keep the quality as high as I can. Our releases likely won't be as large as this until we can get a programmer and editor hired on staff, it takes a lot of time to edit and rewrite. So releases from here on out will be 10k until then.
I'm glad you like that Wallace is the protagonist instead of a self-insert. I've always found stories to be stronger with an established protagonist but I understand people's desire to self-insert.
The game so far has been amazing. I love seeing new fur-tastic VN's (i know pun) This is def giving me echo vibes in both theme and quality and I'm excited to see whats next.
The fact that this is tagged horror has me interested and the character designs are great(big fan of the possum) definitely will give it a shot as I'm always intrigued by horror in the furry genre.
Also can I have the artists names? I'd like to see more of their work and give them a follow on their pages if possible.
Edit: I found the artist nevermind. Now I'm off to download this Novel! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for me
I'm glad you like their designs and were able to found what you needed. Once you've read what we got so far, I'd love to hear your opinion and feedback.
For starters, the characterization of the cast is very nice! I didn't expect to take as much of a liking to Lucas as I did and the other members are a delight as well.
The writing while good had some typos I see throughout nothing huge that can't be fixed with a quick patch.
The choice of music also really helped the scenes feel more emotional your composer is definitely doing their job well.
The art is all very nicely done as to be expected from Shuik and everyone is drawn in a unique style that fits their personality.
The setting while a bit "cliche" (though to be honest every setting is) the horror and the story revolving around the diary and the mystery of the events behind it are very intriguing and I'm already crafting theories in my head.
All in all I'll be sure to give it a solid 5 stars when I upvote it. It has enough of a solid ground to to become something great and you're team made a good first impression can't wait to read more.
Also if you're looking for thoughts on the NSFW proposal I've seen mentioned I'd say I certainly wouldn't say no to a option to eventually get frisky with the love interests but even if it never happens the story is solid as is and will be enjoyable with or without spicy content.
Really like the VN so far, but some parts of the story before the first choice are kinda long to read but after that is so much nicer, love the thrilling part with the soundtracks. It's possible if you make two versions SFW and NSFW, some animation with the eyes and a Discord Server for everyone to talk more abt the VN (and easier if you have smth to said to everyone too)
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does this visual novel contain nsfw content
Not yet, I don't think.
For some odd reason, I'm just imagining the characters' musical tastes: Lucas as a jazz/funk trombonist, Leigh as a punk-rock guitarist, and Oscar as a (hyper)pop tenor.
The music when Wallace was trying to save the person in trouble (For me, it was Lucas) rocked. Made me headbang.
But still, the situation just...gosh... I really like this game and I am aware of the disclaimers, but man...
Ikr
ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy an update (hopefully for Oscar)
ohhhhhh a update
Devlog for update 3.0?
I will be sincere... this is one of the most beautiful and well arranged visual novel I have the pleasure to play!!! I like the introspective point of view of the main character and... god Oscar will be the death of me... he is... is... just too much! I love him so much ahahah. Keep going! I can't wait to read the next part!
I'm really glad you enjoyed Wallace's perspective. I really wanted to make his internal monologue and personality shine through as this is just as much his story as the rest of the boys. I hope we've able to keep you satisfied throughout this VN's journey.
Bruh that one song in the nightmare slaps sooo hard, (I think it was labeled as "Heavy5" not really sure.)
I really want to do a remix of it.
okay i wont lie as someone who has wrote book and or novels myself, this visual novel is one of the best i have had the pleasure of reading and i'm sure everyone else who has also read it would think so to. Lucas is by far my favourite he is so cute! and is really complex and just an all round amazing character! keep up the great work!
I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far! Your kind words are very much appreciated and I'm really glad you like Lucas so much! We've all been working really hard to make this project work, so I hope we can meet your expectations going forward.
So far, I've discovered two things: Theres an "R" after "conforting".
I'm pretty sure Wallace is supposed to say this as they are the only two here
Thank you for your amazing work!
Greetings from Russia!
Hello! I read the current demo and it's very good. What I like the most is that it has a backbone --the main plot of murder-mystery-- that supports the VN than mainly focusing on the romance of the characters' slice of life and than being a typical college story. It gives something to continue to read and root for the MC. I look forward in the next update.
a really good vn!
How can i unlock the gallery?
Gallery hasn't been added yet! I'm not quite sure how to program it right, so I'll putting it on hold until I either get a programmer or can figure out how to do it myself.
haven't even played yet but from the pictures on the page i already find the characters to be hot
Gonna add this to my coverage list on Youtube!
Leigh best boi ❤
Hopefully there's not going to be any DDLC style malarkey after that last scene.
Please 😭
Echo\Repeat\Password\Silent Hill vibes are happening to me and I love it!!! 😍😍😍
Pretty good VN, but too short...
Waiting for updates!
Greetings from cold Russia!
This is like my new VN I'm obsessed with and can't wait for future updates!
I really like the game, I'm still semi new to the world of visual novels but this is very different from the other ones I have played, then such a heavy cliff hanger im interested in the next update 👍
not to be rude or anything but im kind of getting repeat vibes alot alot and im loving it.
Hi
spoilers:
so whoever made that art of the oscar has all of my love cause holy-
his energy is so bright...
and damn that sudden change when lucas was embarrassed caught me off guard
the cliffhanger pains me so much
omgomgomg why am i now coming across this???
I wanna add to the Comments. I think this is the best game start I've seen in a long time. This set the bar so high and i hope it stays up there, i really have high hopes for this one. Literally great writing, amazing character choice. Great CGs (people who played this through know why). This could be the best VN out there if it continues like this. I can't think of anything to add but keep up the work.
SPOILERS:
I loved the first build of the novel, though I think it's a little bit obvious who the favourite character out of the three are x) Played through all routes and I like the major differences between the characters. I personally like Lucas more than Oscar and Leigh, but all three characters have their own charms, let alone Wallace being adorable in their own right! :)
The only "issue" I guess I have is the pacing seemed to just go out of wack and suddenly in a, I'm guessing, dream state/ dream scene? Like, when you choose to sit down next to someone, then you get up after a text and suddenly need to save someone from being hung? Just seems sudden and a weird change of pace for me. I'm not a writer personally, so maybe my advice isn't the best, but I feel like it'd be better on the reader if it were worded differently, or if it were presented differently. Otherwise, I do like the direction that this novel is going, and it will be one that I keep up to date with! I love romance / horror series like Echo and TSR and I think this has the capability to reach such stardom! <3 I'd love to be apart of the discord and the process of this VN being built upon, giving feedback where needed :)
Personally, I love the 3 of them each one are absolutely charming in his own way (Oscar: sexy and love teasing/ Leight: mysterious, class, calm and really kind/ Lucas: sharp-tongue but really shy with knowledge of his own defaults, with a sweet heart inside) ^^
this is awesome hope to see more I just finished Oscar route but I will do the Possum route Leigh if I remember and I will do Lucas route soon but I will tomorrow I can't wait for other stuff that would be awesome.
Violet Memoir? More like GOLDEN MEMOIR HOLY COW. Seriously have never played a visual novel build for the first time and have been as excited for the next update, ever. I mean, an enticing story revolving around a serial killer and trying to dissect how she lost her marbles, well-written characters that aren't just one dimensional for love interests, a JAW-DROPPING nightmare sequence coupled with a skin-crawling score for maximum tension and dread? I mean geez the only thing that could have been the proverbial cherry on top for that part is if there was a CG of the boy of interest you chose just to help showcase the disfiguration Wallace described. I've already played all 3 routes twice because it's just that good. (Ashleigh is my favorite for his mother hen personality but Oscar is a loveable flirty goof and Lucas is the spicy fox that's never afraid to tell it like it is. Even having a favorite though I would be happy ending up with any of them <3)
If you can stomach the horror I would definitely recommend trying this to anyone. I AM HOOKED.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that you're excited for the next build! We'll hopefully be pumping these out each month. Leigh is definitely a great choice for a favorite, so I'm ecstatic you love him so much.
I love hearing about the parts you enjoyed, I really hope you'll enjoy how the story unfolds especially learning more about these characters I love.
Very good VN, i'd love to see more. I really like the good "bad boy" Leigh <3
Who?
Oops my mistake. I have very bad memory for names i meant Leigh
Hello VioletMemoir ! I'm just finish to play your VN: and it's was really really good^^ ! good job, please continue !
But I have one question: the background song named "peaceful" in the audio files, what is his real name and who is the artist who make it because it's really a beautiful song and I want to know who made this...
Thanks in advance and good luck!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Peaceful was a royalty free song made by Luca Fraula. All the songs in the files are in the about section in the title screen.
Many thanks you ^^
Just discovered this VN and I'm gonna give it a try, but first I have to ask, is there currently or will there in the future be NSFW content?
It's currently undecided. I'll be talking to my patrons after a couple of builds asking for their thoughts on if it should stay sfw or not. If it comes to it, I could just do versions with both.
Is the decision poll up right now? I'm asking because I may want to become a supporter and contribute to it
Not yet! I'll likely wait a couple builds before asking that so I have more supporters so I can get a larger sample size for that poll.
Fair enough, I wish you luck with all of this!
Ooooooh I can't wait for more! I'm so happy with the guys and characters and writing so far!
Absolutely been loving the story so far. My only gripes are that the music abruptly stops sometimes instead of being gradually slowed down (ok for certain parts though) and the loops of it isn't as smooth as I'd like to be. By no means am I an expert on the topic but I just figured I'd give my opinion on that.
All 3 of the guys are endearing in their own way and I always have to really think about what my main route would be. Oscar best boi don't @ me but Lucas is just so adorable. Not as interested in Leigh but I'm sure that if I bothered to get to know him more I'd love him as much as the other two.
If the quality of this keeps up then it'd sure get people talking like some of the other VNs around.
Edit: Forgot to mention that I love that we're playing as Wallace and not as ourselves. We don't need to literally be in the story to be invested. Honestly not throwing shade on other stories that let us do it however
Thanks for the kind words! I'll keep the quality as high as I can. Our releases likely won't be as large as this until we can get a programmer and editor hired on staff, it takes a lot of time to edit and rewrite. So releases from here on out will be 10k until then.
I'm glad you like that Wallace is the protagonist instead of a self-insert. I've always found stories to be stronger with an established protagonist but I understand people's desire to self-insert.
The game so far has been amazing. I love seeing new fur-tastic VN's (i know pun) This is def giving me echo vibes in both theme and quality and I'm excited to see whats next.
The fact that this is tagged horror has me interested and the character designs are great(big fan of the possum) definitely will give it a shot as I'm always intrigued by horror in the furry genre.
Also can I have the artists names? I'd like to see more of their work and give them a follow on their pages if possible.
Edit: I found the artist nevermind. Now I'm off to download this Novel! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for me
I'm glad you like their designs and were able to found what you needed. Once you've read what we got so far, I'd love to hear your opinion and feedback.
For starters, the characterization of the cast is very nice! I didn't expect to take as much of a liking to Lucas as I did and the other members are a delight as well.
The writing while good had some typos I see throughout nothing huge that can't be fixed with a quick patch.
The choice of music also really helped the scenes feel more emotional your composer is definitely doing their job well.
The art is all very nicely done as to be expected from Shuik and everyone is drawn in a unique style that fits their personality.
The setting while a bit "cliche" (though to be honest every setting is) the horror and the story revolving around the diary and the mystery of the events behind it are very intriguing and I'm already crafting theories in my head.
All in all I'll be sure to give it a solid 5 stars when I upvote it. It has enough of a solid ground to to become something great and you're team made a good first impression can't wait to read more.
Also if you're looking for thoughts on the NSFW proposal I've seen mentioned I'd say I certainly wouldn't say no to a option to eventually get frisky with the love interests but even if it never happens the story is solid as is and will be enjoyable with or without spicy content.
TL;DR I really like your VN
Really like the VN so far, but some parts of the story before the first choice are kinda long to read but after that is so much nicer, love the thrilling part with the soundtracks. It's possible if you make two versions SFW and NSFW, some animation with the eyes and a Discord Server for everyone to talk more abt the VN (and easier if you have smth to said to everyone too)