Usually I'm onto atletic guys, but... AHHH! Lucas is SO cute, even if he's somewhat rude.
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Just two things:
There are some lines where the text is too much and doesn't fit in the textbox XD
That "isn't" could be replaced by "Aren't"(?) As I have been taught, "Is" is for the pronouns "he", "she", "it". Travis and Connor count as "They". I think so (?)
Anyway. Thank you for this. I am really loving this visual novel. Keep it up. Oh, and sorry if the things I said above are a burden.
Sorry for the late reply! The text going so low is due to your screen size. I'll get some mobile players to give some feedback and I might adjust the amount of text during Lucas' day 3. As for the Lucas quote, it is an intentionally incorrect wording to sound more natural to how people talk.
Ok, got it. Thanks for the clarification. And don't worry about being late. On the contrary, I apreciate the reply. Thank you, and sorry if I'm being a bother.
I REALLY like this VN so far and am seriously considering recommending it to a friend, but I first kind of want to know if there is going to be any NSFW or explicit content in future builds?
Depends really. I'll put it up to a patreon vote at a later time, for now there isn't any in it yet but I'm not opposed to potentially adding it in the future.
Thanks for the speedy response. I like that idea of letting the fans decide which direction this VN goes, and personally I would vote for the path of tasteful and moment appropriate NSFW content. Mainly since I've seen stuff like that, and its related themes really enrich a VN when used in the right amount and methods
Eventually! This will likely have to wait till I can hire a separate programmer for this kinda thing. My knowledge is very basic and I also would need to get the assets for the other two routes as well.
Because apparently the competition for my #1 favorite VN has to be a three-way tie now. As if No More Future and 9:22 already fighting for that spot wasn't enough!
I see I'm not the only one drawn to this type of story as those three are my top three as well. I will do my best to let you know if I find another one I like, and I hope you can also do the same.
For some odd reason, I'm just imagining the characters' musical tastes: Lucas as a jazz/funk trombonist, Leigh as a punk-rock guitarist, and Oscar as a (hyper)pop tenor.
I will be sincere... this is one of the most beautiful and well arranged visual novel I have the pleasure to play!!! I like the introspective point of view of the main character and... god Oscar will be the death of me... he is... is... just too much! I love him so much ahahah. Keep going! I can't wait to read the next part!
I'm really glad you enjoyed Wallace's perspective. I really wanted to make his internal monologue and personality shine through as this is just as much his story as the rest of the boys. I hope we've able to keep you satisfied throughout this VN's journey.
okay i wont lie as someone who has wrote book and or novels myself, this visual novel is one of the best i have had the pleasure of reading and i'm sure everyone else who has also read it would think so to. Lucas is by far my favourite he is so cute! and is really complex and just an all round amazing character! keep up the great work!
I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far! Your kind words are very much appreciated and I'm really glad you like Lucas so much! We've all been working really hard to make this project work, so I hope we can meet your expectations going forward.
So far, I've discovered two things: Theres an "R" after "conforting".
And "Yeah, I'm Okay. It was just a silly nightmare. I don't know why freaked lut so much." Is written twice. Unless It's done in purpose, but I don't think so.Sorry If this is being too rude :3
Hello! I read the current demo and it's very good. What I like the most is that it has a backbone --the main plot of murder-mystery-- that supports the VN than mainly focusing on the romance of the characters' slice of life and than being a typical college story. It gives something to continue to read and root for the MC. I look forward in the next update.
Gallery hasn't been added yet! I'm not quite sure how to program it right, so I'll putting it on hold until I either get a programmer or can figure out how to do it myself.
I really like the game, I'm still semi new to the world of visual novels but this is very different from the other ones I have played, then such a heavy cliff hanger im interested in the next update 👍
so whoever made that art of the oscar has all of my love cause holy- his energy is so bright... and damn that sudden change when lucas was embarrassed caught me off guard the cliffhanger pains me so much
I wanna add to the Comments. I think this is the best game start I've seen in a long time. This set the bar so high and i hope it stays up there, i really have high hopes for this one. Literally great writing, amazing character choice. Great CGs (people who played this through know why). This could be the best VN out there if it continues like this. I can't think of anything to add but keep up the work.
I loved the first build of the novel, though I think it's a little bit obvious who the favourite character out of the three are x) Played through all routes and I like the major differences between the characters. I personally like Lucas more than Oscar and Leigh, but all three characters have their own charms, let alone Wallace being adorable in their own right! :)
The only "issue" I guess I have is the pacing seemed to just go out of wack and suddenly in a, I'm guessing, dream state/ dream scene? Like, when you choose to sit down next to someone, then you get up after a text and suddenly need to save someone from being hung? Just seems sudden and a weird change of pace for me. I'm not a writer personally, so maybe my advice isn't the best, but I feel like it'd be better on the reader if it were worded differently, or if it were presented differently. Otherwise, I do like the direction that this novel is going, and it will be one that I keep up to date with! I love romance / horror series like Echo and TSR and I think this has the capability to reach such stardom! <3 I'd love to be apart of the discord and the process of this VN being built upon, giving feedback where needed :)
Personally, I love the 3 of them each one are absolutely charming in his own way (Oscar: sexy and love teasing/ Leight: mysterious, class, calm and really kind/ Lucas: sharp-tongue but really shy with knowledge of his own defaults, with a sweet heart inside) ^^
this is awesome hope to see more I just finished Oscar route but I will do the Possum route Leigh if I remember and I will do Lucas route soon but I will tomorrow I can't wait for other stuff that would be awesome.
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Just played through beefcake and edgelord routes, loved it, thanks for your work on this project!
I love this game, i like lucas leigh and oscar ;)
How many days/chapters are planned for this game?
whichever path I choose Leigh is just my absolutely favorite, I love him in every way omg someone help me I feel lovestruck
Usually I'm onto atletic guys, but... AHHH! Lucas is SO cute, even if he's somewhat rude.
Alert. Potential spoilers ahead:
.
.
.
.
Just two things:
There are some lines where the text is too much and doesn't fit in the textbox XD
That "isn't" could be replaced by "Aren't"(?) As I have been taught, "Is" is for the pronouns "he", "she", "it". Travis and Connor count as "They". I think so (?)
Anyway. Thank you for this. I am really loving this visual novel. Keep it up. Oh, and sorry if the things I said above are a burden.
Lucas must be protected at all costs
Agreed.
Sorry for the late reply! The text going so low is due to your screen size. I'll get some mobile players to give some feedback and I might adjust the amount of text during Lucas' day 3. As for the Lucas quote, it is an intentionally incorrect wording to sound more natural to how people talk.
Ok, got it. Thanks for the clarification. And don't worry about being late. On the contrary, I apreciate the reply. Thank you, and sorry if I'm being a bother.
How in the heck did you make me love this vn in 4 builds only like god damn
I REALLY like this VN so far and am seriously considering recommending it to a friend, but I first kind of want to know if there is going to be any NSFW or explicit content in future builds?
Depends really. I'll put it up to a patreon vote at a later time, for now there isn't any in it yet but I'm not opposed to potentially adding it in the future.
Thanks for the speedy response. I like that idea of letting the fans decide which direction this VN goes, and personally I would vote for the path of tasteful and moment appropriate NSFW content. Mainly since I've seen stuff like that, and its related themes really enrich a VN when used in the right amount and methods
Oh, and one more quick question, what species is the MC?
Wallace is a weasel!
Thanks, for some reason I was blanking on it
Yeah, I think you used the word 'musteline' a couple of times in the script; so, I assumed Wallace was like a weasel or a ferret.
So, will the phone background on the main menu change depending on whichever route the player chooses à la Psychic Connections?
Eventually! This will likely have to wait till I can hire a separate programmer for this kinda thing. My knowledge is very basic and I also would need to get the assets for the other two routes as well.
Because apparently the competition for my #1 favorite VN has to be a three-way tie now. As if No More Future and 9:22 already fighting for that spot wasn't enough!
I see I'm not the only one drawn to this type of story as those three are my top three as well. I will do my best to let you know if I find another one I like, and I hope you can also do the same.
does this visual novel contain nsfw content
Not yet, I don't think.
For some odd reason, I'm just imagining the characters' musical tastes: Lucas as a jazz/funk trombonist, Leigh as a punk-rock guitarist, and Oscar as a (hyper)pop tenor.
The music when Wallace was trying to save the person in trouble (For me, it was Lucas) rocked. Made me headbang.
But still, the situation just...gosh... I really like this game and I am aware of the disclaimers, but man...
Ikr
ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy an update (hopefully for Oscar)
ohhhhhh a update
Devlog for update 3.0?
I will be sincere... this is one of the most beautiful and well arranged visual novel I have the pleasure to play!!! I like the introspective point of view of the main character and... god Oscar will be the death of me... he is... is... just too much! I love him so much ahahah. Keep going! I can't wait to read the next part!
I'm really glad you enjoyed Wallace's perspective. I really wanted to make his internal monologue and personality shine through as this is just as much his story as the rest of the boys. I hope we've able to keep you satisfied throughout this VN's journey.
Bruh that one song in the nightmare slaps sooo hard, (I think it was labeled as "Heavy5" not really sure.)
I really want to do a remix of it.
okay i wont lie as someone who has wrote book and or novels myself, this visual novel is one of the best i have had the pleasure of reading and i'm sure everyone else who has also read it would think so to. Lucas is by far my favourite he is so cute! and is really complex and just an all round amazing character! keep up the great work!
I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far! Your kind words are very much appreciated and I'm really glad you like Lucas so much! We've all been working really hard to make this project work, so I hope we can meet your expectations going forward.
So far, I've discovered two things: Theres an "R" after "conforting".
I'm pretty sure Wallace is supposed to say this as they are the only two here
Thank you for your amazing work!
Greetings from Russia!
Hello! I read the current demo and it's very good. What I like the most is that it has a backbone --the main plot of murder-mystery-- that supports the VN than mainly focusing on the romance of the characters' slice of life and than being a typical college story. It gives something to continue to read and root for the MC. I look forward in the next update.
a really good vn!
How can i unlock the gallery?
Gallery hasn't been added yet! I'm not quite sure how to program it right, so I'll putting it on hold until I either get a programmer or can figure out how to do it myself.
haven't even played yet but from the pictures on the page i already find the characters to be hot
Gonna add this to my coverage list on Youtube!
Leigh best boi ❤
Hopefully there's not going to be any DDLC style malarkey after that last scene.
Please 😭
Echo\Repeat\Password\Silent Hill vibes are happening to me and I love it!!! 😍😍😍
Pretty good VN, but too short...
Waiting for updates!
Greetings from cold Russia!
This is like my new VN I'm obsessed with and can't wait for future updates!
I really like the game, I'm still semi new to the world of visual novels but this is very different from the other ones I have played, then such a heavy cliff hanger im interested in the next update 👍
not to be rude or anything but im kind of getting repeat vibes alot alot and im loving it.
Hi
spoilers:
so whoever made that art of the oscar has all of my love cause holy-
his energy is so bright...
and damn that sudden change when lucas was embarrassed caught me off guard
the cliffhanger pains me so much
omgomgomg why am i now coming across this???
I wanna add to the Comments. I think this is the best game start I've seen in a long time. This set the bar so high and i hope it stays up there, i really have high hopes for this one. Literally great writing, amazing character choice. Great CGs (people who played this through know why). This could be the best VN out there if it continues like this. I can't think of anything to add but keep up the work.
SPOILERS:
I loved the first build of the novel, though I think it's a little bit obvious who the favourite character out of the three are x) Played through all routes and I like the major differences between the characters. I personally like Lucas more than Oscar and Leigh, but all three characters have their own charms, let alone Wallace being adorable in their own right! :)
The only "issue" I guess I have is the pacing seemed to just go out of wack and suddenly in a, I'm guessing, dream state/ dream scene? Like, when you choose to sit down next to someone, then you get up after a text and suddenly need to save someone from being hung? Just seems sudden and a weird change of pace for me. I'm not a writer personally, so maybe my advice isn't the best, but I feel like it'd be better on the reader if it were worded differently, or if it were presented differently. Otherwise, I do like the direction that this novel is going, and it will be one that I keep up to date with! I love romance / horror series like Echo and TSR and I think this has the capability to reach such stardom! <3 I'd love to be apart of the discord and the process of this VN being built upon, giving feedback where needed :)
Personally, I love the 3 of them each one are absolutely charming in his own way (Oscar: sexy and love teasing/ Leight: mysterious, class, calm and really kind/ Lucas: sharp-tongue but really shy with knowledge of his own defaults, with a sweet heart inside) ^^
this is awesome hope to see more I just finished Oscar route but I will do the Possum route Leigh if I remember and I will do Lucas route soon but I will tomorrow I can't wait for other stuff that would be awesome.