bruh one day i was thinking about how i would love a game with one of those "idiot beefcake who doesnt know what hes saying half the time? then this just hit me in the head with a baseball bat and all i can say is thankyou
I'd hate to be that guy and I absolutely know this is extremely unimportant to the story at large; but, shouldn't Lucas be wearing suspenders under his waistcoat instead of a belt?
I will protect Lucas with my life. I don't know how there's so much content already! I'm absolutely blown away by how put together everything is. The grammar usage is great and so is the writing, so this error stood out to me. Because there are multiple subjects the dialogue should be:
"Aren't Travis and Conner bi?"
*Is* is used for a singular subject, while *are* is for multiple subjects. TBH I only learned a lot of the more intricate English/Grammar stuff recently myself and now I'm addicted 😅. Anyway, keep up the good stuff! You've got another patreon coming your way for sure.
Usually I'm onto atletic guys, but... AHHH! Lucas is SO cute, even if he's somewhat rude.
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Just two things:
There are some lines where the text is too much and doesn't fit in the textbox XD
That "isn't" could be replaced by "Aren't"(?) As I have been taught, "Is" is for the pronouns "he", "she", "it". Travis and Connor count as "They". I think so (?)
Anyway. Thank you for this. I am really loving this visual novel. Keep it up. Oh, and sorry if the things I said above are a burden.
Sorry for the late reply! The text going so low is due to your screen size. I'll get some mobile players to give some feedback and I might adjust the amount of text during Lucas' day 3. As for the Lucas quote, it is an intentionally incorrect wording to sound more natural to how people talk.
Ok, got it. Thanks for the clarification. And don't worry about being late. On the contrary, I apreciate the reply. Thank you, and sorry if I'm being a bother.
I REALLY like this VN so far and am seriously considering recommending it to a friend, but I first kind of want to know if there is going to be any NSFW or explicit content in future builds?
Depends really. I'll put it up to a patreon vote at a later time, for now there isn't any in it yet but I'm not opposed to potentially adding it in the future.
Thanks for the speedy response. I like that idea of letting the fans decide which direction this VN goes, and personally I would vote for the path of tasteful and moment appropriate NSFW content. Mainly since I've seen stuff like that, and its related themes really enrich a VN when used in the right amount and methods
Eventually! This will likely have to wait till I can hire a separate programmer for this kinda thing. My knowledge is very basic and I also would need to get the assets for the other two routes as well.
Because apparently the competition for my #1 favorite VN has to be a three-way tie now. As if No More Future and 9:22 already fighting for that spot wasn't enough!
I see I'm not the only one drawn to this type of story as those three are my top three as well. I will do my best to let you know if I find another one I like, and I hope you can also do the same.
For some odd reason, I'm just imagining the characters' musical tastes: Lucas as a jazz/funk trombonist, Leigh as a punk-rock guitarist, and Oscar as a (hyper)pop tenor.
I will be sincere... this is one of the most beautiful and well arranged visual novel I have the pleasure to play!!! I like the introspective point of view of the main character and... god Oscar will be the death of me... he is... is... just too much! I love him so much ahahah. Keep going! I can't wait to read the next part!
I'm really glad you enjoyed Wallace's perspective. I really wanted to make his internal monologue and personality shine through as this is just as much his story as the rest of the boys. I hope we've able to keep you satisfied throughout this VN's journey.
okay i wont lie as someone who has wrote book and or novels myself, this visual novel is one of the best i have had the pleasure of reading and i'm sure everyone else who has also read it would think so to. Lucas is by far my favourite he is so cute! and is really complex and just an all round amazing character! keep up the great work!
I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far! Your kind words are very much appreciated and I'm really glad you like Lucas so much! We've all been working really hard to make this project work, so I hope we can meet your expectations going forward.
So far, I've discovered two things: Theres an "R" after "conforting".
And "Yeah, I'm Okay. It was just a silly nightmare. I don't know why freaked lut so much." Is written twice. Unless It's done in purpose, but I don't think so.Sorry If this is being too rude :3
Hello! I read the current demo and it's very good. What I like the most is that it has a backbone --the main plot of murder-mystery-- that supports the VN than mainly focusing on the romance of the characters' slice of life and than being a typical college story. It gives something to continue to read and root for the MC. I look forward in the next update.
Gallery hasn't been added yet! I'm not quite sure how to program it right, so I'll putting it on hold until I either get a programmer or can figure out how to do it myself.
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Oh no
An otter
oh YES an otter
quick question is this SFW or NSFW
I just wanna take a break on play a lot of NSFW VNs not that their bad just a mental break
Excited for this new build, this is another visual novel I’ve really enjoyed.
Oh, I recognized some soundtracks... "Blue Feather" track, I know it from Repeat VN by Shirokoi.
I really hope we get to see more of Selwyn he seems like an interesting character to get to know and he is very cute
bruh one day i was thinking about how i would love a game with one of those "idiot beefcake who doesnt know what hes saying half the time? then this just hit me in the head with a baseball bat and all i can say is thankyou
I'd hate to be that guy and I absolutely know this is extremely unimportant to the story at large; but, shouldn't Lucas be wearing suspenders under his waistcoat instead of a belt?
This comment made me laugh so hard xd
"Aren't Travis and Conner bi?"
*Is* is used for a singular subject, while *are* is for multiple subjects. TBH I only learned a lot of the more intricate English/Grammar stuff recently myself and now I'm addicted 😅. Anyway, keep up the good stuff! You've got another patreon coming your way for sure.
Ahem... I did notice that too. Scroll down a little and find my observations. Your answer is there. XD
Just played through beefcake and edgelord routes, loved it, thanks for your work on this project!
I love this game, i like lucas leigh and oscar ;)
How many days/chapters are planned for this game?
whichever path I choose Leigh is just my absolutely favorite, I love him in every way omg someone help me I feel lovestruck
Usually I'm onto atletic guys, but... AHHH! Lucas is SO cute, even if he's somewhat rude.
Alert. Potential spoilers ahead:
.
.
.
.
Just two things:
There are some lines where the text is too much and doesn't fit in the textbox XD
That "isn't" could be replaced by "Aren't"(?) As I have been taught, "Is" is for the pronouns "he", "she", "it". Travis and Connor count as "They". I think so (?)
Anyway. Thank you for this. I am really loving this visual novel. Keep it up. Oh, and sorry if the things I said above are a burden.
Lucas must be protected at all costs
Agreed.
Sorry for the late reply! The text going so low is due to your screen size. I'll get some mobile players to give some feedback and I might adjust the amount of text during Lucas' day 3. As for the Lucas quote, it is an intentionally incorrect wording to sound more natural to how people talk.
Ok, got it. Thanks for the clarification. And don't worry about being late. On the contrary, I apreciate the reply. Thank you, and sorry if I'm being a bother.
How in the heck did you make me love this vn in 4 builds only like god damn
I REALLY like this VN so far and am seriously considering recommending it to a friend, but I first kind of want to know if there is going to be any NSFW or explicit content in future builds?
Depends really. I'll put it up to a patreon vote at a later time, for now there isn't any in it yet but I'm not opposed to potentially adding it in the future.
Thanks for the speedy response. I like that idea of letting the fans decide which direction this VN goes, and personally I would vote for the path of tasteful and moment appropriate NSFW content. Mainly since I've seen stuff like that, and its related themes really enrich a VN when used in the right amount and methods
Oh, and one more quick question, what species is the MC?
Wallace is a weasel!
Thanks, for some reason I was blanking on it
Yeah, I think you used the word 'musteline' a couple of times in the script; so, I assumed Wallace was like a weasel or a ferret.
So, will the phone background on the main menu change depending on whichever route the player chooses à la Psychic Connections?
Eventually! This will likely have to wait till I can hire a separate programmer for this kinda thing. My knowledge is very basic and I also would need to get the assets for the other two routes as well.
Because apparently the competition for my #1 favorite VN has to be a three-way tie now. As if No More Future and 9:22 already fighting for that spot wasn't enough!
I see I'm not the only one drawn to this type of story as those three are my top three as well. I will do my best to let you know if I find another one I like, and I hope you can also do the same.
does this visual novel contain nsfw content
Not yet, I don't think.
For some odd reason, I'm just imagining the characters' musical tastes: Lucas as a jazz/funk trombonist, Leigh as a punk-rock guitarist, and Oscar as a (hyper)pop tenor.
The music when Wallace was trying to save the person in trouble (For me, it was Lucas) rocked. Made me headbang.
But still, the situation just...gosh... I really like this game and I am aware of the disclaimers, but man...
Ikr
ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy an update (hopefully for Oscar)
ohhhhhh a update
Devlog for update 3.0?
I will be sincere... this is one of the most beautiful and well arranged visual novel I have the pleasure to play!!! I like the introspective point of view of the main character and... god Oscar will be the death of me... he is... is... just too much! I love him so much ahahah. Keep going! I can't wait to read the next part!
I'm really glad you enjoyed Wallace's perspective. I really wanted to make his internal monologue and personality shine through as this is just as much his story as the rest of the boys. I hope we've able to keep you satisfied throughout this VN's journey.
Bruh that one song in the nightmare slaps sooo hard, (I think it was labeled as "Heavy5" not really sure.)
I really want to do a remix of it.
okay i wont lie as someone who has wrote book and or novels myself, this visual novel is one of the best i have had the pleasure of reading and i'm sure everyone else who has also read it would think so to. Lucas is by far my favourite he is so cute! and is really complex and just an all round amazing character! keep up the great work!
I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far! Your kind words are very much appreciated and I'm really glad you like Lucas so much! We've all been working really hard to make this project work, so I hope we can meet your expectations going forward.
So far, I've discovered two things: Theres an "R" after "conforting".
I'm pretty sure Wallace is supposed to say this as they are the only two here
Thank you for your amazing work!
Greetings from Russia!
Hello! I read the current demo and it's very good. What I like the most is that it has a backbone --the main plot of murder-mystery-- that supports the VN than mainly focusing on the romance of the characters' slice of life and than being a typical college story. It gives something to continue to read and root for the MC. I look forward in the next update.
a really good vn!
How can i unlock the gallery?
Gallery hasn't been added yet! I'm not quite sure how to program it right, so I'll putting it on hold until I either get a programmer or can figure out how to do it myself.
haven't even played yet but from the pictures on the page i already find the characters to be hot
Gonna add this to my coverage list on Youtube!
Leigh best boi ❤
Hopefully there's not going to be any DDLC style malarkey after that last scene.
Please 😭
Echo\Repeat\Password\Silent Hill vibes are happening to me and I love it!!! 😍😍😍
Pretty good VN, but too short...
Waiting for updates!
Greetings from cold Russia!